Do you like this poem so far (it isnt my best…)?

Once there were two warring countries,
divided by the sea.
Two traitors were pursued by law,
so then they chose to flee.

Of grass and straw,
they built a boat
and waited for the tide.

But when it came,
it wouldn't float,
so they began to cry.

So stranded on their sinking vessel,
the two boys cried and wept,
for they had families, friends and wives,


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