give me your answer to this question?

In the movie The Shining, Jack Nicholson gives a vivid performance as a man sinking into madness. He suffers at first from mild hallucinations. Then he has drink in an imaginary bar. Finally, he chases his wife through a deserted hotel.

What is the writing flaw in this passage?
A. misspelling
B. comma misplacement
C. Excessive subordination
D. Absence of transitions
E. none of the above

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