I wrote a poem thing and want to know if its any good?

Here I sit at the same place I first met you, Thinking of what I thought when I first laid eyes on you. Your skin as beautiful as the pale moon light, Your smile was just a twinkle in the night, your eyes sparkled, you were just an unbelievable sight. Like an angle that fell from the sky, I couldn’t believe my eyes, all I could do was admire you from across the bar. I felt my heart sink and my body tense up, all my muscles flexed. I was just perplexed that one so beautiful would stumble in at that time of night. But what a sight for sore eyes you were, I wanted to speak but I stood in dismay what would I say, A woman like that, far to classy for a joe like me, cue the drunken Timbo to create a moment, a moment where I wouldn’t be shaken, I beamed with confidence as I came up to you…, Alas here I sit alone at the bar in that every same chair where I first laid eyes on you. Wishing to see you walk through that door at 2 A.M.

The Nights pass by where I don’t see you, I sit here and wait, like a little boy trying to catch a fire fly alone in the night. Waiting for that moment to recapture what was lost, Longing for a woman that shines like the pale moon light, Her seductive e
yes , her breath taking smile, tempts me to dance with the devil in the pale moon light.

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